Wednesday, October 30, 2013

Dream with me?


Blurry but so clear,
Dark but light will be forever here.
Thoughts envelope me, swallow me up, send me off

 A pink flush, a lovely rush,
An eerie cry, that leaves me terrorised.
Thoughts envelope me, swallow me up, send me off

The smell of laughter will fill me up,
Swollen belly, full of hopes an aspirations.
Thoughts envelope me, swallow me up, send me off 

A sense of light,
Not a flashlighy, or a candle
But a sun so warm, so mighty
Yes, I can handle
Thoughts envelope me, swallow me up, send me off

The nerd in me, will be forever pleased,
Words swarm in, captivate me
Thoughts envelope me, swallow me up, send me off



***
 Cut not the wings of your dreams,
for they are the heartbeat and the freedom of your soul. 

~ Flavia ~
***





I hope you all enjoyed my poem, it's a bit immature but my friend says that poems like these are easier to comprehend, bleh :) I am however trying really hard to progress in poetry get a little deeper ya' know?
 I'd love to hear your thoughts!

Smiley Face,
Ony

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ALSO! During the making of the poem I had this song on reply, give it a listen?

4 comments:

  1. I don't think it's immature. It's actually very beautiful and still realistc. i like how at one point you're all " A pink flush, a lovely rush,
    An eerie cry, that leaves me terrorised." and then, "The nerd in me, will be forever pleased," haha. awesomeness. Great poem :)

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    1. Thanks Leah! I value your opinion!

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  2. Utterly amazing.

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